Poems

Time to test out some of my poetry on you all. Let me know what you think...if you even like poetry.

*Nameless

Kamikaze raindrops throw themselves at me,
Plummeting down to the earth.
My windshield wipers act like a Nazi;
Swipe, swipe, they sing with mirth.
These raindrops must be suicidal,
For my wipers never stand idle.

Also, I can't decide which one I like better of these two versions. Help?

*Grocery Store Revelation

There was a woman behind me in line
At the grocery store.
She held only two items:
Beer and cotton candy.
And I absently wondered how they would taste together...

or:
At the grocery store, I stood in line,
Waiting for my turn.
The woman behind me swept up,
Carrying two items.
Beer and cotton candy, always good for a friday night.
Made me wonder-how would these two taste together?

I think I like the first one. But, as this is my first interactive post, I want to hear from you!! Be honest. :) I think I like the short, little blips of poetry right now...can you tell?
That's all. Thanks for reading.